Tuesday
We discussed what critiquing is, and the purpose of it. Why do we need to critique? What do we learn from critiques?
What is a critque for?
- A critique can be used to share ideas, to improve our work
- Constructive feedback that you can learn/build from
What makes a good critique?
- When people offer insight into my work and comment on things I would’ve never noticed
- People taking the time to actually look into your work, and making constructive comments on the work
- Suggesting ways to move forward, not redoing the entire work
What makes a difficult critique?
- Comments with no context: “That looks cool” “You could do it better”
- When people don’t study/examine your work properly, and make critiques based on their limited knowledge on your work.
Practical Rules for Critiquing:
- Honesty
- Respect
- Curiosity
Thursday
On Thursday brought in 5 of our best documents, and we were put into groups to share our documents and discuss our work, while critiquing each others work. Critiques I received from my group:
- Could consider your space from a designers perspective and redesign the space? Think about the colour palette?
- How would the cafe function if there were added functions to the space? How would it interact with the environment?
- Look into the structure of the cafe & the beanbags. What atmosphere does it create?
- Mapping out the social aspects
- Talk about the surrounding points of interest: e.g. One Tree Hill, Cornwall Park itself. The Cafe is only able to exist because of these factors.